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I wrote a poem...PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK?

Music

What is so special about those melodies?
And words
That can even make you feel happy on Mondays
The time that you spend listen to it makes records…

Music will always be there for you when you’re happy
Or when you’re sad
It’s hard to resist because it’s too catchy
And for some minutes it makes you to stop feeling bad…

You travel to a world where everything is perfect
And you wish that those minutes would last longer
Because there is no conflict
And everything is better

If you’re happy it can make you feel sad
If you’re sad it can make you feel happy
It can give you something that you never had…
And for some minutes you no longer feel empty

But then you wake up
And face the real world
Everything breaking up
And you no longer can relate to the word happy

Public Comments

1. 8/10

2. good one... i like it

3. I have never seen a poem on that topic before. Wonderful.

4. ask your teacher!!

5. i'm sorry, i thought that was very very bad.

6. C'mon..... repeat it.... it cannot touch my heart....

7. I can relate to this.

8. This is a great poem!!!I would give you 8 out of ten.Keep practising and you will get better!!

9. sorry I give it kind of a 7. You should work on the rhythm of the words a little. I like the general idea though.

10. I think its beautiful and deep. Wonderful! You have a wonderful talent.

11. i love it!
it is exactly how i feel about music.
listening to music i my favorite thing to do.
it helps me when i am sad,mad,ect.
anyway, wonderful poem.
keep writing

~totaly in love~

12. that was WONDERFUL!!! i really enjoyed it. you can tell it came from the heart. keep writing!!!!


hope this helps!!!!!!!!!!!!

13. great......that really is the magic of music

14. It's good keep it up!